black bird

Oh, wow! That was amazing! Just...amazing. :) I don't know what it's about really, but your words and rhythm are so good! Is it about someone drowning/sinking? That's just my ...

I liked this. I feel the overall story with the struggle will be interesting. I'm sure someone else has probably mentioned this, but you should break it up into more ...

I really liked this. I liked the language you used, and the first paragraph was a good hook to draw us in. I think the second ending was better, but ...

Wow, I almost don't want to use spoons anymore. The next time I eat soup I'm going to feel so bad! Haha. I think it's really interesting that you chose ...

Wow, I really liked this. I'm not a huge poem reader, but I liked the images you used, such as, "scorches like first winter frost". I like how it's a ...